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[CE] Not Me

Published: Oct 10, 2016

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Description

Entry for thunderstorm210 's contest
Hope you like it!

but I still can't shade ;_;

Thunderstorm/Thundercloud © thunderstorm210
Art © Me

Image size

1024x1570px 1.09 MB

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Aerthier

Edited Aug 9, 2017Featured

_{Ok, so...
My thoughts:
- I like the idea
- I like mouth
- Shading on her body is rather good
- I adore how You/I drew paint on her body
- Neck marking looks like a collar
- Eyes look so fake that it hurts
- Tears and stitches are pretty good
- Hair is ok - Could be better
- Outline is... ok if You have no background, so... Yeah it's not so awful here but I think You/I should have taken care of those white dots near the outline

Rates:
- Shading: 4/5
- Anatomy: 3/5
- Hair: 3/5
- Eyes: 1/5
- Accesories: 1/5
- Details: (Paint ♥) 4/5
- Background: ..:no background = no rate:..
- Colors: _{_{It's NOT fullart, so... Not much to do with colors really-}}
Final rant:
5,3/10}